
Harry pushed his way between Tom’s outstretched hand and Char. Henry was over privileged and proud of it. It’s a mantle he wears in his demeanor, in his posture and on his countenance. Some women find it very magnetic. Char finds it over-bearing.
“Hey Char! What are you doing this weekend? Wanna come to the Hamptons with us?” It was a question, but then again it wasn’t. The expectation was that she would say yes.
“Char?” Tom stood his ground against Harry’s assault. Her name escaped his lips easily. He smiled a disarmingly crooked smile and his eyes . . . she saw them twinkle into a wink without winking.
“What a beautiful name.”
His voice laid her ears like music. She instinctively turned to him and said, “Thank you, it’s short for Anchara.”
She very rarely offers such information without being pressed directly. She met his eyes, they were a clear, pool blue. And she smiled.
Harry looked back and forth between Char and Tom and before he could say anything, the another young man came up to the ever larger gathering. He stood next to Harry and said, “An…Ann…Cha…Cha…what? What does that mean? Where are you from?”
She turned her almond eyes toward him without turning her body. The question was asked of her hundreds of times it seemed. Most of the time she politely answered but the bluntness and inconsideration from this man made her guard go up. She knew he was curious. She knew he was flirting with her in his own way, many men do.
But she didn’t care.
“It’s An-char-a and I’m from Pennsylvania.” The tone of her answer made it clear she didn’t want the conversation to continue. And with most people, the message is received.
But not with this young man. Bravado in the presence a beautiful woman can make a man lose whatever filters would normally be there to protect one in a social situation. This man’s peacock feathers were out in full view.
“Pennsylvania really? But where are you really from? I mean you know, what country.” He obviously wasn’t giving up. By this time, even Harry was starting to get restless with the questioning.
Harry started, “Look….”
And Tom interrupted, “How about we go downstairs for a drink Anchara?”
She already loved how he said her name. She turned her eyes and body toward him and held out her hand. “I’d love to.”
And with that, the two of them walked hand in hand toward the exit with the other three young men looking after them, two with gaping mouths.
“Wait!” shouted her friend Steve.”I’m coming too!”
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Char opened her eyes to streaming sunlight from open, curtainless windows. She sat up slowly, aware of her aching bones but feeling better since before she can remember. She saw the Thai breakfast of mango and sticky rice with a pewter cup filled with water next to it. She tucked her legs underneath her and reached for the food. She ate ravenously.
The sound of chickens clucking reached her ears. The floor boards had gaps in them, some far apart enough for her to see the ground below and she saw pecking chickens moving from between one floor board to another.
“I’m home.” she thought, “I’m home.”








June 26th, 2010 at 2:25 am
You are having so much fun with this suspense, Puna, aren’t you!
Dangling these chapters out in front of us like a carrot (you bad girl)! I had to go back and reread “before he could say anything, the young man next to Harry said” because at first I thought it was Tom and realized later it wasn’t. But once I figured that out, I was on a roll with you. I lived in a “house” in Peru once where the ground floor was the entrance for chickens and I lived/slept up above and could see them through the cracks like Char. Your story is closer to home than you might think…as it concerns chickens, that is.
What a sweet, precious image.
June 26th, 2010 at 3:40 am
Me too – I had to go back and re-read the last ‘installment’. Wouldn’t it be so very cool if you got yourself a book here..a novella (or something) and submitted to a publisher and had it published? All coming from the discipline and practice of bi-weekly writing???
YOU GO GIRL!! Write on….
June 26th, 2010 at 4:35 am
You don’t need a publisher, you can do it yourself at blurb.com and print on demand. great picture and please write on ..
June 26th, 2010 at 8:01 am
I need more!
June 26th, 2010 at 12:38 pm
I love the continuing saga and mystery of Char’s story. It just keeps getting better, Puna! Too bad we have to wait two weeks for the next chapter!
June 26th, 2010 at 7:35 pm
Well, I was innocently questioning her about the story this morning, and by golly, I think she has the entire novel already written in that gorgeous little head of hers! BTW, I know as much as you all do about the story.
June 26th, 2010 at 10:18 pm
Yes, you are keeping us on the edge of our seats, but I love the voice you are using, love her sense of self, her sense of humor, her pragmatism. This is a wonderful way to create a story.